Hey all!
In my free time this past Christmas season, I wrote a short story that is now on the Amazon Kindle store...it's free (so I'm not getting anything out of this - just for personal fun)...if anyone would be willing to read it for me and give me some feedback, I'd appreciate it!
If you don't have a Kindle, you can get the Kindle reader for free for your computer, and read it on there.
I'd love any feedback/criticism!
If you search "Christmas Spirit Adam Carter" it will be the top result, or here is the link:

http://www.amazon.com/Christmas-Spir...bosnation0e-20